Post by Fiction on Dec 2, 2006 17:39:57 GMT -5
Can people (*pokes at Bay and gives huge puppy eyes expression*) pweaaase critique this picture for me? I'll love you forever if you do. Maybe even give you a cookie.
And I want HARSH critique. Like, any itsy bitsy little miniscule thing you don't quite like about it, tell me. I'll just eat you if you tell me it's beautiful or whatever because that is NOT what I want to hear. I want this to be perfect in the end if it's liked well enough, and to do that I need lots of critisism so I can fix anything that may be wrong with it that I've missed.
kthnx
The Picture:
Version Two (w/ slanted lines):
Version Three (horse color altered to match bg more):
Okay... I guess this image is supposed to have a theme of broken beauty and love. My questions for you guys are...
Which version is your favorite and why?
Does the picture fit the theme well?
Do the colors match well or do they need to be altered?
Does the blended harp in the background distract from or add to the picture as a whole?
Is the lightning (in case you didn't notice... its that little light streak in the top right corner next to the ending "t" in Text) unnecessary and distracting?
Does the text and slogan style and placement seem to work well with the picture?
Is the yellow coloring at the bottom of the "Text" annoying and distracting or is it fine?
Does the horse look like a pretty black arabian mare or do you think I could do better with another picture?
Does the horse stand out too much? (If so, how would you fix that?)
Does the lighting on the horse generally match the lighting of the background?
I don't care what you answer or how you do it, I would just like to know what you guys think of it. The questions are just some I've come up with on my own that you can use as a guideline if you like.
I'll love you forever if you could help.
Thanks.
And I want HARSH critique. Like, any itsy bitsy little miniscule thing you don't quite like about it, tell me. I'll just eat you if you tell me it's beautiful or whatever because that is NOT what I want to hear. I want this to be perfect in the end if it's liked well enough, and to do that I need lots of critisism so I can fix anything that may be wrong with it that I've missed.
kthnx
The Picture:
Version Two (w/ slanted lines):
Version Three (horse color altered to match bg more):
Okay... I guess this image is supposed to have a theme of broken beauty and love. My questions for you guys are...
Which version is your favorite and why?
Does the picture fit the theme well?
Do the colors match well or do they need to be altered?
Does the blended harp in the background distract from or add to the picture as a whole?
Is the lightning (in case you didn't notice... its that little light streak in the top right corner next to the ending "t" in Text) unnecessary and distracting?
Does the text and slogan style and placement seem to work well with the picture?
Is the yellow coloring at the bottom of the "Text" annoying and distracting or is it fine?
Does the horse look like a pretty black arabian mare or do you think I could do better with another picture?
Does the horse stand out too much? (If so, how would you fix that?)
Does the lighting on the horse generally match the lighting of the background?
I don't care what you answer or how you do it, I would just like to know what you guys think of it. The questions are just some I've come up with on my own that you can use as a guideline if you like.
I'll love you forever if you could help.
Thanks.
